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OF BLOOD: Chapter One excerpt
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November 10,2007 by LGOlson
Her body shook violently as the paramedics picked her carefully up from the blood soaked bed.
"She's bleeding out!" One cried out as they swiftly wrapped her bleeding wrists and applied pressure.
Smeared blood covered her pale naked flesh. Her head rolled softly back and forth as strangers seemed to dance around her. "What's your name Miss? Can you tell us your name?" Another asked her as he put a oxygen mask on her.
She swallowed hard and the thick metallic taste of blood ran down her throat. They cover her quickly with warm blankets and strapped her down.
"We need to move on this! Lets go! We're going to lose her!"
They rushed her threw the crowd of on lookers, cops and EMS. Eyes staring at her as they rolled her to the ambulance.
She could feel dark eyes burning her from somewhere in the crowd and it made her heart race. She could still feel him inside her head and on her body and in her blood. Her dark eyes went wide as she caught a glimpse of shadows following her threw the crowd, staring and haunting her. She began shaking uncontollabilly and struggle against the straps as the dark eyes lit with fire.
The doctor walked out of the room and approached a young man. He stood about 5'10, curly brownish blonde hair to the middle of his shoulders. "You must be Joey Tempest?" The doctor asked as he put his hand out to him and shook it firmly.
"Yeah. How is she doing?" He asked nervously.
It had been such a long night and his green eyes looked tired and red. "She's doing good. We'll be keeping her for a few more days until we're sure she's doing well enough to go home."
Joey shook his head softly. "What happened to my sister?" He asked still in shock, his handsome face so worried. The Doctor slowly took his arm and lead him down to the waiting room. He was a young man for being a doctor. Dark hair barely touched his shoulders, his eyes a dark brown on a handsome face. Joey figured he was about 29 years old.
They sat down and Joey ran his hand threw his hair. "We had to do blood transfusions on your sister. She lost a lot of blood last night," He said amazed.
"What did they do to her?"
"That's a good question. When we did the examination on her when she came in. We found several puncture wounds on her body."
"Puncture wounds? Like what?"
"To be more precise, we believe they are bite marks."
"Bite marks?"
"Yes. They were human in every way except for the incisors and canines. Both wrists where bitten into, the inside of her thighs each had deep puncture wounds."
Joey smirked softly. "That's crazy."
"I know. But once we got the wounds cleaned up, the bruising and puncture wounds are that of a human bite. Not an animal."
"Was she raped?" Joey asked out of the blue, closing his eyes awaiting the hammer to fall.
"No, there are no signs of her being raped. We suspected it and did a rape kit, but there was no penetration or tearing, no fluids. No sign of any sexual activity what so ever."
Joey sighed and rubbed his neck, relieved.
"When can I see her?"
"Now if you like, she's sedated right now"
Joey stood up a bit disoriented and shook his hand. "Thank you," He said softly.
"If you have any questions at all please let me know."
"I will."

Joey stood by the bed and slowly took her pale hand. Her wrists wrapped tightly. She lay quietly asleep. "Hey sweetheart," he smiled at her and squeezed her hand softly.
"What happened to you, Vale?" He asked the sleeping woman softly. Her dirty blond hair was still spotted with dried blood, her face still so pale. Her lips were full and dry, smeared makeup from last night was still on her face and under her eyes. He slowly touched her face.
"Who would harm you Vale? Who did this to you?" He whispered softly and sat down by her. Vale never had any enemies her whole life. Every body always loved her, she was funny and sweet. Joey sighed as he bent over and softly kissed her forehead.
Week later:
They pulled up to the house. Vale sat quietly in the car and stared at the house. Joey parked the car in front of the garage and shut it off. He leaned back in the seat and sighed softly. "Are you ok?" he asked softly as he reached over and took her hand.
Vale smiled softly and glanced at him. "I'm fine," she said softly.
"You wanna talk about it?"
She slowly shook her head no. She trembled and gazed down at the hole in her jeans. "Ok. When you're ready. I'll be here." He said so softly as his thumb slowly massaged her hand. "Joey?"
He opened the car door and paused, gazing at her. "Yeah."
"I'm sorry," she said softly.
"For what?"
"For everything. Your always taking care of me."
He smiled at her. "Well, once you're a famous writer and filthy rich. You get to take of me." He said softly grinning at her and chuckled. Vale smiled at him as he patted her on the leg. "Lets get you in the house. I'm sure Hatch can't wait to give you hell about this."
"I'm sure. He has never gotten over the fact I live here."
"Ahhh screw Hatch, I like you better than him anyway. Just don't repeat that."
Vale opened the door and got out painfully. Joey shut his door and ran around the car.
"Are you ok?" He asked sweetly as he closed the car door.
"Yeah, just a little sore."

He took her arm gentally and walked with her to the house. Hatch came bounding to the door and opened it as they reached the door. He smiled at her as she walked in. "You look like shit ,Vale," he popped off.
"Thanks Hatch," she said softly trying to ignore him.
Joey shook his head. "Don't start on her already Hatch. She just got home."
Joey walked over to the couch and slowly eased her down on it. She laid down and curled her sore body up into the deep cushions. Hatch chuckled and sat down right beside her and popped her on the ass. Vale shook her head and closed her eyes ignoring him, covering her eyes with her hand. "Go away Hatch," she said softly.
Joey glared down at him. "Go home Hatch, leave her alone for awhile."
"Just wanted to see the bite marks," He chuckled and tried to pull up the gause wrapping around her wrists.
Joey scratched his head getting irritated as Vale popped his hand. "It's been a long day, leave her alone. Go home, I know you have one."
"I like it better here. Besides most of my stuff is here anyway."
Vale just turned over and put her face in the crack of couch. Hatch leaned back as she cried out painfully. "What the fuck?" he spouted out at he stared at her.
Joey jumped at her cries as she grabbed her lower back and blood ran threw her fingers, her body arched painfully and she screamed again. Hatched jumped off the couch as the sound of flesh tearing tore threw him. Joey ran to her and grabbed her hands, pulling them away as he lifted her shirt. "What's happening" She screamed as pain of ripping flesh tore threw her back. "Jesus.Vale!"
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Deltore - 03/22/2008
Just thought I would leave I comment to say I'm very fond of this story.I came across your site looking for other writers.I must say I'm in impressed,I can't wait tell you post more I will without a doubt be reading it.
LGOlson - 03/24/2008
Thank you very much! i will be updateing very soon!
JEMoore - 11/11/2007
You and your violent tendacies lol It's good so far, what else you gonna do to poor Vale, Lisa
LGOlson - 11/11/2007
lol, you don't want to know! I am feeling her seduction into evil.
 
 
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